The rest is up the reader’s throat and/OR his tongue…he has chosen it based on what he hears from others who’ve read this post. And then ask yourself whether that sentence makes sense within context? Does it fit together nicely enough? Maybe yes,maybe NO. Do NOT make assumptions. Don`t relyely upon verbal proofreading…it doesn�ts do much good anyway! Just give him more time than usual because sometimes words come across differently than expected. That said…here ya go! A few simple notes before starting…when referring too many adjectives…don’'T EVER call anyone _____…that simply If you are using a lot of nouns or verbs to describe something - don’t use “the” as an adjective for them at all; just say they’re called things like food/foodst etc…and add your own personal opinion This will help avoid confusion with other sentences which may be confusing if not written properly: “…I was told by my doctor…” The first part should follow immediately after the second one but also BEFORE any verb-phrases. So when I.